I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Alizae. I like your blog post about what's strong and whats not wrong. I think you did a really good blog post I like it. Maybe next time you could add what your blog post is going to be about, and your next step?
Kia Ora Alizae. I like your blog post about what's strong and whats not wrong. I think you did a really good blog post I like it. Maybe next time you could also add what you had to do and why.
Always remember to add your next step and ask anyone of they anything you could do to improve your blog post. What is your favourite sport on your slide? Or do you like them all the same?
Kia Ora Alizae it is Lacie here. I like your blog post about what's strong and whats not wrong. I think you did a really good blog post I like it. Maybe next time you could also add what you had to do and why.
Always remember to add your next step and ask anyone of they anything you could do to improve your blog post. What is your favourite sport on your slide? Or do you like them all the same?
Hey Ailzae it is Cayleigh here. Maybe you can write what you are doing why you are doing it for a ect. Next time you can write what is your best slide. Why do you like making a slide?
Kia ora, I’m Gemeve from Gilberthorpe School I like the colors you did You brought me back to when I did this it was really fun Why did you do the colors you did?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Alizae.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about what's strong and whats not wrong. I think you did a really good blog post I like it. Maybe next time you could add what your blog post is going to be about, and your next step?
Blog you later.
Kia Ora Alizae.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about what's strong and whats not wrong. I think you did a really good blog post I like it. Maybe next time you could also add what you had to do and why.
Always remember to add your next step and ask anyone of they anything you could do to improve your blog post.
What is your favourite sport on your slide? Or do you like them all the same?
Kia Ora Alizae it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about what's strong and whats not wrong. I think you did a really good blog post I like it. Maybe next time you could also add what you had to do and why.
Always remember to add your next step and ask anyone of they anything you could do to improve your blog post.
What is your favourite sport on your slide? Or do you like them all the same?
Hey Ailzae it is Cayleigh here.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you can write what you are doing why you are doing it for a ect.
Next time you can write what is your best slide.
Why do you like making a slide?
Kia ora, I’m Gemeve from Gilberthorpe School
ReplyDeleteI like the colors you did
You brought me back to when I did this it was really fun
Why did you do the colors you did?
Hello Alizae
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good blog post I like it.I like your blog post about what's strong and whats not wrong.