I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Make sure you write in your own words instead of copying and pasting. I like how slide four shows flags of the different countries involved in the war.
Kia ora Alizae, I like how you put how WW1 started, I like how you put the weapons used and the countries that fought in WW1. Next time you can make the font a bit clearer so we can read the capital letters in sentences.
hey alizae the best prat of your slide was the gun slide you taught me that in ww1 there was lots of guns next time you could pot some more interesting stoff good bye
Hey Alizae, i really liked ur WW1 post, wow those guns are pretty big! maybe next time you should tell us how they communicate? so this is pretty cool and this is all i got to say because it's so cool. -Soheilla
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Make sure you write in your own words instead of copying and pasting. I like how slide four shows flags of the different countries involved in the war.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Alizae, I like how you put how WW1 started, I like how you put the weapons used and the countries that fought in WW1. Next time you can make the font a bit clearer so we can read the capital letters in sentences.
ReplyDeletehey alizae
ReplyDeletethe best prat of your slide was the gun slide
you taught me that in ww1 there was lots of guns
next time you could pot some more interesting stoff
good bye
a Benaiah whats pot?
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ReplyDeletecool I like guns
ReplyDeleteHey Alizae, i really liked ur WW1 post, wow those guns are pretty big! maybe next time you should tell us how they communicate? so this is pretty cool and this is all i got to say because it's so cool. -Soheilla
ReplyDeletelike about the guns Orlando
ReplyDeletehi Alizae i like your ww1 facts maybe next time you could do better
ReplyDeleteHey there Alizae its Daisy here
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love you fabulous anzac slide!!
Maybe next time you could not put so many gun pics on!