I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
kio ora i'm gemeve from gilberthorpe school. I love the coler on you ship becoue you can see your pichere did you thenck about puting more informachon on to it why did'it you put what mecher of the ship and the ships needs
Hi my name is Joe from Karoro School my class room is Ruma Rima. you are good at make ships.Did you think about how to turn the ship around. Why did you make a ship?
Hi my name is James and I go to Karoro School, my class room is Ruma Rima. I like how you have done your Ship. you should put some people in it and a wheel on it so it looks like a real ship, I LOVE IT
Hi Alizae, my name is Herbie from Owairaka School in room six. I really like the drawing and background. Maybe you should add more information about Captain Blood. if you want to see my blog its http://odsherbertr.blogspot.co.nz/.
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kia ora l'm olivia Wow you knconked my socks off !!!
ReplyDeletekio ora i'm gemeve from gilberthorpe school.
ReplyDeleteI love the coler on you ship becoue you can see your pichere
did you thenck about puting more informachon on to it
why did'it you put what mecher of the ship and the ships needs
Hi my name is Joe from Karoro School my class room is Ruma Rima. you are good at make ships.Did you think about how to turn the ship around. Why did you make a ship?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is James and I go to Karoro School, my class room is Ruma Rima. I like how you have done your Ship. you should put some people in it and a wheel on it so it looks like a real ship, I LOVE IT
ReplyDeleteHi Alizae, my name is Herbie from Owairaka School in room six.
ReplyDeleteI really like the drawing and background. Maybe you should add more information about Captain Blood. if you want to see my blog its http://odsherbertr.blogspot.co.nz/.