I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello Alizae, I like the slide about White Sunday. Maybe make the font color darker so I can see the slide. Put more detail on the slide. That is all Good job
hiya Alizae, this is amazing work, and it is really cool that you put in lots of pictures and facts, but I have one question for you... Have you actually been to samoa? please reply, From Mikayla K.
Kia ora Alizae, Aryan here checking out your blog! This looks really cool and there is loads of facts! Just next time remember to put full stops in. Anyways blog ya later!
Kia ora Alizae I like this and I also like the images because it;s really colourful. On three slide some of the words are hard to see so maybe change that so you can see it better.
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Hello Alizae,
ReplyDeleteI like the slide about White Sunday.
Maybe make the font color darker so I can see the slide.
Put more detail on the slide.
That is all
Good job
HELLO NOAH HERE WHAT IS WHITE SUNDAY AND WHAT DOES IT EVEN MEAN! you should write that down on the slide
ReplyDeletehiya Alizae, this is amazing work, and it is really cool that you put in lots of pictures and facts, but I have one question for you...
ReplyDeleteHave you actually been to samoa?
please reply,
From Mikayla K.
Kia ora Alizae. This is a very good slide, maybe next time get the teacher or another student to cheek it, it has some mistake in there.
ReplyDeletenice job i would love to go to samoa
ReplyDeleteKia ora Alizae, Aryan here checking out your blog!
ReplyDeleteThis looks really cool and there is loads of facts!
Just next time remember to put full stops in.
Anyways blog ya later!
Kia ora Alizae I like this and I also like the images because it;s really colourful. On three slide some of the words are hard to see so maybe change that so you can see it better.
ReplyDeleteSawadekah Alizae nice job maby next time put clear words but good job I like your slide blog you later .
ReplyDeletenice pitchers i like it
ReplyDeletecool so will it be ok if i look at your viedo please thank you
DeleteKia ora Alizae
ReplyDeleteChloe here.
This is really cool I like getting to know about new tribes and countries.
Maybe next time you could do another countrie like south africa and about all the little things we need to be greatfull for.
What is your most proudest slide out of these?
Mine is the becautiful samoa.
Nice blogging you blog you later
on the 6th slid on the word is not god it is good but basis that it is a good job.
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