I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello Alizae, it's Mrs Pam. I like that you have used a slide show to let people know a little more about you. You have lots of things that you like. Next time you might like to make a title for your slide so people know what you are writing about. Great first effort!
Hey alizae Roxy here, I like how you have put this on your blog it makes it stand out a lot. I like how you have said different thing on each of your slides it looks really cool keep it up
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Hey Alizae, What a great way to show the world what you and your friend mykalya likes. Kai pai keep up the great work:)
ReplyDeleteHello Alizae, it's Mrs Pam. I like that you have used a slide show to let people know a little more about you. You have lots of things that you like. Next time you might like to make a title for your slide so people know what you are writing about. Great first effort!
ReplyDeleteI too really enjoyed your posting but I need to see more of your work. Could you post some more things that you have done for me to read.
ReplyDeleteHey alizae Roxy here,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have put this on your blog it makes it stand out a lot. I like how you have said different thing on each of your slides it looks really cool keep it up
Hi Alizae Tyler here.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you showed us what you like. It really shows us something about you.
Next time could you add some writing.
Hi Alizae Freedom
ReplyDeleteI really like your slide of a tiger.
Hi Alizae Safiyya here
ReplyDeleteYour slide is amazing,
you should add words.
HI it is Angus I like how you made your slide look cool but maybe you should do more work blog you later!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHello Alizae Mikayla here you could add more word in next time hope you have a good day and i love the work you did blog you later
ReplyDeleteHello Alizae!
ReplyDeleteAwesome work. Next time you could add more slides and maybe some text in the slides, and an introduction?
Well blog you later:-)
Hi Alizae!
ReplyDeleteAwesome work. Maybe add some more slides and some more words, an introdution too, instead of just who it's by.
See ya Alizae!!!!
Hey Alizae
ReplyDeleteI like how you did the slide with Mikyla!
Its cool I just ask Mikayla if she still likes apples but now she likes oranges!
Blog you later
cute so cute :3
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